do thoughts
really need punctuation
or should the thinker
just balance thoughts
inklings
and empty spaces
until the thought looks right
the poem complete
everything
in its proper place
and then
stop
i wonder
if love is that way
too
does love need punctuation
or can it too just be
a carefully crafted compilation
of words
and spaces
and empty lines
like breaths
and kisses
in between fragments
of simple conversation
that last forever
until there are none
Tuesday, December 23, 2008
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I really liked this poem, especially the last part. What kind of punctuation do we usually give love?
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